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Raven Black Gownby *Neko-Vi

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Haute couture gown inspired by and representing raven black hair~

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Critique by ~Saphira96 Sep 21, 2012, 7:05:49 AM

Questo è,di sicuro,un lavoro che, fra tutti,è più possibilmente realizzabile.

Il corpetto è la cosa che crea di sicuro un grosso impatto. In quanto estetica avrei messo un pizzo nero di una trama diversa,ma il fiocco riesce comunque a spiccare egregiamente. Nella gonna hai evitato dettagli inutili,rendendola dolce e delicata,ma anche molto raffinata allo stesso tempo.

Il visone marrone è di sicuro un tocco di classe,farlo marrone è stato azzardato ma hai trovato una tonalità perfetta perché non stoni con il resto. Hai inoltre scelto,a parer mio giustamente,di non disegnare i capelli legati alla bambola. Legati avrebbero secondo me stonato con il corpetto.

Infine è realizzabile in quanto,tutto ciò che hai immaginato per esso è in commercio e inoltre non si tratta delle stoffe luccicanti che sei solito a disegnare. Se ci sono costano troppo e altre volte diventano un po troppo esagerate anche per una bella donna.

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Critique by ~Kagallie Sep 19, 2012, 1:13:03 PM

The corset looks beautiful the pattern on the inside is lovely and the grey/white colour pallet works well together. It loses it's beauty with the dark black bow. I feel it should have been grey or not there at all. I do not like the way the dark brown looks with the black. A softer colour would have tied the two together. A gentle brown or redish-brown maybe, I'm not sure but the two darks don't look aesthetically appealing.

The skirt looks lovely the semi-transparent layer on top of the dark is one of my favorites. I love the diamonds and chains. The shading on it, however, feels wrong. The armbands appear to have a bit of light touching on each side while the model is facing forward, yet the dress just loses light pretty much in the middle. There is a hint of light on the diamond on the other side but I feel the skirt gets to dark to fast to match the upper body lighting.

I very much enjoy the necklace the detail in it is lovely and I think the tear drops are a good accent to the skirt detail.

Over all I just feel there are to many shades going on for it to be appealing. White, grey black, dark brown. I think one of them needs to be removed and it would look better.

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~I-love-anime363 Mar 6, 2013 New member

Love it I write and I hope it is okay for me to use this dress in my book:L

~LeafyHeart Mar 6, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

so dark and sweet, congrats!

~Carolyne-Peluci Feb 27, 2013 New member

Beautiful!

~BlackRavaen Feb 18, 2013

So pretty!!

~ki79ka Jan 1, 2013

I really love the jewel details on the dress sides and how the corset is actually light grey, looks like the upper part brings balance to the whole dress! Beautiful!