This is a very impressive gown. It's eye-catching, elegant, and fairly simplistic. The color scheme is very nice, although in my opinion it would make more sense to use the color scheme of the four Harry Potter houses for a Pottermore Dress. The pointed collar does have a very "witchy" feel which feels appropriate for the dress, and the sleeves help add a magical feel to the look.
I like how even though the dress has some fancy decorations, it's not overloaded with detail that will distract the eye. It's a very simple, unified look, and the design on the bodice is quite nice. The necklace is also a very nice touch.
I'd have to say that my only two complaints are about the skirt - while the draping layers are lovely, they seem to slant off towards one side, and I feel a more symmetrical arrangement would be better. And the hanging banner, although keeping with the theme very nicely, seems a bit impractical. I feel like it would bump against the legs if someone tried to walk in this dress, and it stands out a bit too much. Perhaps a more subtle way to put the letter P on the dress would work better.
Complaints aside, this is a beautiful dress with a very creative design. I look forward to seeing your next design!
I find the dress to be very eye catching. The skirt is very cleverly done and I love the layers! The colour scheme is basic and simplistic which makes the glittery arms/shoulders very eye catching, another plus in my opinion.
I'm not enjoying the design on the corset, it gives me the feel of something more Celtic then something 'magic'. Though I do enjoy the idea of having a design there. The moon, as it stands right now reminds me of Sailor Moon. (Which could just be my inner nerdiness talking).
Going back to things I enjoy, I really enjoy the Banner and the way it is attached to the dress. It is a brilliant idea and fits in very nicely with all the layers of the dress.
All of your dresses are beautiful. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps you could try a MSPaintAdventures dress? You probably have a million comments everyday suggesting ideas, and you may even have already chosen the rest of the websites you're using for Web in Vogue, but I just thought I'd give my input. Keep up the lovely, amazing work. <3
The bodice is gorgeous very intricate design and the transparent sleeves give it a light feel.
That said the bottom needs work it looks bulky and heavy compared to the light feeling of the bodice. Also all of your other designs incorporate the web sites logo into the dress itself here it looks like an after thought using the chains to make it look like a sign.
The bodice and the gown don't look like they should be part of the same dress to me.