A really lovely work. It was hard to find spots to critique. The spots I found are few and far between. First off, before I get to that, I'd like to say: * Lovely attention to details * I cannot wait for other designs Now the critique: As far as the gown goes, it's elegantly designed and fit for a magazine or social event. However, some of the colored areas seem a bit too bright? (hard to explain). What I mean by that is, the transition from lightest to darkest could be a bit smoother. Somewhere in the lighter tones it feels like the colors made a bit of an awkward jump. Maybe that's just me, though.
Finally, my last critique has nothing to do with the gown, but with the girl's face. One of the pupils seems to be a bit smaller than the other. That bothers me a bit, but it's an easy fix, and a minor error at that.
Overall, very beautiful. I'd love to see more designs. Maybe your work will be the designs for a hot new fashion line? You certainly have the talent
Honestly, your gowns are as beautiful as always, I love the minute details and the sparkles on the dress are perfect in my opinion. The transition of light to dark on the dress looks good to me. The only real critique I have is on the girl's face and hair. The hair looks slightly disheveled on top but it doesn't really go with the overall look that you seem to be going for, which seems to me to be more polished. The face is the other issue, the pupils look like they are looking off into space. I cant quite explain it but the nose looks off, perhaps not putting in dots for the nostrils? And the mouth looks to be in an odd spot on the face, it looks like its too far over on one side. Ofcourse, this is all just my opinion, but I think you did a wonderful job overall!!!