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Platinum Blonde Gown by Neko-Vi Platinum Blonde Gown by Neko-Vi
Haute couture gown inspired by and representing platinum blonde~

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A really lovely work. It was hard to find spots to critique. The spots I found are few and far between. First off, before I get to that, I'd like to say:
* Lovely attention to details
* I cannot wait for other designs
Now the critique:
As far as the gown goes, it's elegantly designed and fit for a magazine or social event. However, some of the colored areas seem a bit too bright? (hard to explain). What I mean by that is, the transition from lightest to darkest could be a bit smoother. Somewhere in the lighter tones it feels like the colors made a bit of an awkward jump. Maybe that's just me, though.

Finally, my last critique has nothing to do with the gown, but with the girl's face. One of the pupils seems to be a bit smaller than the other. That bothers me a bit, but it's an easy fix, and a minor error at that.

Overall, very beautiful. I'd love to see more designs. Maybe your work will be the designs for a hot new fashion line? You certainly have the talent
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Honestly, your gowns are as beautiful as always, I love the minute details and the sparkles on the dress are perfect in my opinion. The transition of light to dark on the dress looks good to me.
The only real critique I have is on the girl's face and hair. The hair looks slightly disheveled on top but it doesn't really go with the overall look that you seem to be going for, which seems to me to be more polished. The face is the other issue, the pupils look like they are looking off into space. I cant quite explain it but the nose looks off, perhaps not putting in dots for the nostrils? And the mouth looks to be in an odd spot on the face, it looks like its too far over on one side.
Ofcourse, this is all just my opinion, but I think you did a wonderful job overall!!!
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WinchesterKitty Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
I can't help but wonder what Dirty Blonde would look like
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conleylove Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   General Artist
:O OMG IT SUITS ME!!!!
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Maya-amer Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Amazing dress... makes me love my blonde hair even more :D
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DarkLord75253 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
I prefer the creme blonde, but platinum is one of my top ten.
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EemaX3 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Amazing, very considerate <3 :)
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CrisDLWLF Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
God :wow: So impressive :iconwowplz: I love it!!! :iconloveloveplz:
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Cicillia Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Stunning
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Fayina-Kei-Sancia Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Quite lovely, I can't wait to see the rest of them. XD
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MimiChanLove Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
beauty design
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MadJesters1 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Filmographer
So beautiful :D
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