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Formode: Water by Neko-Vi Formode: Water by Neko-Vi
This is a school project: we have to study water in each of its forms! And then design a collection.
There are just sketches, I should choose just one of these water-forms and then design outfits with the same style... But I can't decide, I like them all! Can you help me? What is your favourite? <3
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First off, let me start by saying that I love the work that you've done in all of your designs, from the monthly dresses to the website-based gowns. I even enjoyed the designs based on the hair color, and I imagine this to be no different. :)

However, there are some drawbacks to this piece, nothing too major. Looking at this piece, I can see that you have steam (which can be caused by boiling water or another form of evaporation), but not mist.

Most would argue that mist and steam are the same thing when they aren't. Mist usually lingers over warmer water, when cold air makes contact with it.

And since I see that there are multiple designs for liquid form (and a couple for solid form), I feel as though mist deserves a spot in your design sheet as well.

Other than that, it has a great impact and the idea is quite original (as are a lot of your works), the technique is brilliant (I imagine that, since you said that this was a school project, it was mandatory pencil sketch), but the lack of a mist design makes me rate the vision at 4.5 instead of a perfect 5.

All in all, I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. Here's hoping for many more great designs. :)
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gotw3 Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
foam is cute, but I think drop and waterfall are very flowing and elegant. I also like river, even though the straight lines seem a bit uncharacteristic for a river. Wonderful overall though! :D
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:iconi-love-daisy:
these designs are amazing in how they are draw and what they reprsent, my favourite would have to be waterfall
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Sitruunaruoho Sep 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Foam is adorable :) But river is very beautiful.
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:iconindhi:
awww foam is adorable!
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PrincesLydiaheTiger Aug 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My favorites are the wave & waterfall dresses <3
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shinegeorgiashine Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What class are you in. It's awesome.
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liilly1504 May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Waterfall.
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KiaraMaye May 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Foam. :nod:
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lovecrazyfun Apr 22, 2013  Student Artist
as much as i love all of them, if i were you i would go for wave~ because i love how the dress flows out to the side giving it a flowing or wavy look and also how cute it looks too
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I'm torn between drop and waterfall...
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