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Chestnut Brown Gown by Neko-Vi Chestnut Brown Gown by Neko-Vi
Haute couture gown inspired by and representing chestnut brown hair~

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It's sort of hard to critique the dress when it's drawn sideways. The front-side of a gown is arguably the view which most people look at, and see if it is something they want to buy or not. I think it might have been better to show a small panel along with this, showing a front-view. That is not to say that I don't like the pose. I absolutely do, but if this is concept you are toying with, I'd recommend drawing a decent view of the dress.

I'll work with what I have. This looks like a really good dress. The hairstyle even fits, I think. Good choice of coloring; the brownish tones in this dress really reflect with what you are presenting. In fact, just about everything here is a good example of displaying a consistent motif. Nothing here makes the other seem alien.

If anything needs to be addressed, I still think it is the figures you draw. However, we've gone over this, so I'll skip around it but add that it is better if you had the model's hair cover the right side of her head completely. All in all, to this date, I say this is the most outstanding submission in your concept series. I think you are getting better and better at what you do. I'm sorry if this critique seems more like a praise than something that scolds you into doing better, but I think you've done really well with this, so all I can say is congrats! Hopefully someone else will do a better job than I did and show you ways in which you can better hone your artistry. :)
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Yes! Yes! Yes! This was a HUGE hit! Everyone loves it, and for good reason! There is great flow, very nice movement captured. The coloring is consistant. The only thing I would change is make the sandals slightly longer to match the length of the feet. I noticed the tassles are bent with the movement, but the necklace is not, although it could be that the necklace is just heavy. ^_^ Other than that, I can't see anything that would need any improvement. Unless you push it to the next limit and make it even MORE detailed! Like a seperate close-up of her head and shoulders. That could be fun! :D
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YKajitaka Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student Interface Designer
 Maybe this is what they call my hair color...  T_T;;
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atram95 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Complimenti!! č veramente Stupendo!!
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LeafyHeart Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it!
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kalliat Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Scary fact when she looks just like me!
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stormgurl101 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
amazing ^^ love it
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OddDuckQuacking Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would so wear this! <3
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Chey4ever Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY~! for brunnetes like me!!! XD absolutely lovely :3
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SunFeather18 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fabulous. just fabulous.
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catty2990 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmusicnoteplz: My hair color's brining sexy back :iconmusicnoteplz:
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Silverfrost128 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
love the shoes!
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